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Thursday 28 October 2021

Humanities Essay Planning

Text - Abomination

Author - Robert Swindell 


Breaches of HR Article -
-Breach means to not have followed it or broken it
-Martha - born into religious cult, has basic rights but no personal - freedom
Martha is treated like a slave by her parents.
- Born and keep in cage not allowed outside.
-Has basic human rights lost rights to education, love freedom ans socialisation.
-No clothes!

* Quotes - nofriends because righteous.
* Kid in basement, Martha to Scott. = Jim doesn't see his mum.
*The righteous believe the devil reaches young people through pop music P.11 
* I know I seem weird to then but it's inside im just like them P.18

Abomination's a boy, Scott. A little boy he lives in the cellar Ina cage P.143
 -She lets her kid live in a cage? She doesn't know! P.146 

-All human beings are born free and endowed with reason and conscience and should act towards one another in a sirit of brotherhood 

- means no one is born different from others - can't be born into slavery and keep in a cage.
- you have access to basic human right- food,water, and shelter 


Main story idea

-Makes us ell empathy/ depressed/ sympathy for Martha

We forgive Martha For keeping the secret about Jim because she is also suffering
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Good story telling
-Builds suspense and tension.

Feel sorry for Jim, feel angry at her parents
- Shows negative influence 

Martha

Yes she went to live with hr sister, gets new cloths, not treated like a slave or different 

Abomination: Resolved - gets socialise, see his mum clothes, freedom, privacy, love

Trauma - Not gonna have normal life 
















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