This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
hi Quaiden. i like this work here. I have not did this before it looks interesting. maybe u should add some more things to this. i think you can work harder then that. I have seen you do harder work. how long did this take you is it your best wanted post.
Hi Quaiden, Evan here I really enjoyed your photo. Here's a tip maybe next time you could add some more words to your blurb. I think its cool how you got money if you found the crocodile.
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hi Quaiden. i like this work here. I have not did this before it looks interesting. maybe u should add some more things to this. i think you can work harder then that. I have seen you do harder work. how long did this take you is it your best wanted post.
ReplyDeleteHi Quaiden, Evan here I really enjoyed your photo. Here's a tip maybe next time you could add some more words to your blurb. I think its cool how you got money if you found the crocodile.
ReplyDeleteThank you Rocki for commenting on my blog and Evan.
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