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Thursday, 20 June 2019
Skate Park
Skate Park.
One day James went the the skate park for a competition. It was hard dropping up and down the half pipe. I had to do my best tricks to win. At the end of the day for the companion of the competition. It goes to James”ya lets go. James beat 30 people to get a trophy. The half pipe was 10 feet a lot of people kids few off their skateboard.
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Nice job Quaiden. I like the way you used James name
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Hi nice story Maybe you could add more detail on what tricks he done and make it a bit longer.
ReplyDeleteHi Quaiden it's Blake from 8sh. I like how you told us what part of the skate park James was skating on and how big it was. Next time you should maybe reread what you have wrote before you publish because there is a couple of mistakes but other than that I think your story was really good.
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